Hey guys, here is my Poster for Library Week. The size of this is in tabloid right now. I tried uploading the original size but could not due to it being too big. Feedback is appreciated.
You might want to increase the size of the rectangle for G. The way I read it was: ALPULG. Try to make your letters descend properly in order for a smoother eye flow with the letters and to make the word more clearer.
Instead of having the book right at the bottom have you considered having an open book completely whit on top of the color bars?! The book is freaking me out with its lines forming weird waves and it makes me thing of cousin it or Pet from edgar and ellen! Try moving the G and its blue block up more so it reads the way u want it too.
Great piece! The contrasting fonts on the bottom really work together so that each line can be different and still hold each other together. The G and blue box of course needs a fixin'. The simplistic approach really worked for you! Cool poster!
Great!!! I really like the concept of it all & it's very unique. The letters for "GALLUP" could use some touch-ups for a smoother read but great job overall!
NICE! Your good to go.
ReplyDeleteYou might want to increase the size of the rectangle for G. The way I read it was: ALPULG. Try to make your letters descend properly in order for a smoother eye flow with the letters and to make the word more clearer.
ReplyDeleteInstead of having the book right at the bottom have you considered having an open book completely whit on top of the color bars?! The book is freaking me out with its lines forming weird waves and it makes me thing of cousin it or Pet from edgar and ellen! Try moving the G and its blue block up more so it reads the way u want it too.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece! The contrasting fonts on the bottom really work together so that each line can be different and still hold each other together. The G and blue box of course needs a fixin'. The simplistic approach really worked for you! Cool poster!
ReplyDeleteGreat!!! I really like the concept of it all & it's very unique. The letters for "GALLUP" could use some touch-ups for a smoother read but great job overall!
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